✨ Holiday Special ✨
All of my services are 10% off for the holiday season! From November 4th to December 25th, take advantage of this special pricing to bring your creative projects to life or find the guidance you need on your publishing journey.

If you’ve completed your poetry manuscript and want thorough, professional feedback, my Manuscript Review & 10-Poem Critique Mentorship is perfect for you. 

For poets with a large, extensive manuscript of 100 or more poems, this mentorship offers a comprehensive review to help you shape and elevate your entire collection. Over 6 weeks, I’ll thoroughly evaluate the themes, pacing, and structure of your work, ensuring that each section of the manuscript flows cohesively. Additionally, I will critique 10 selected poems, offering detailed feedback on language, style, and structure. This service is designed for poets working on a major collection who need expert guidance to polish and finalize their manuscript for publication or submission.

📚 What’s Included:

• Full Manuscript Review
  I’ll carefully review your manuscript and provide comprehensive feedback on:

  • Overall Structure & Flow: Evaluating how well the poems work together and the pacing of the collection.
  • Thematic Development: Ensuring the central themes are consistent and effectively communicated throughout the collection.
  • Voice & Cohesion: Helping you maintain a strong, unified voice across all poems.
  • Order & Transitions: Suggestions on rearranging poems for optimal impact and reader engagement.
    
    

• 10-Poem Critique
  For 10 of your most important or challenging poems, I’ll provide an in-depth critique, covering:

  • Detailed feedback on word choice, structure, and imagery.
  • Suggestions for revision to strengthen the emotional or narrative impact of each poem.
  • Line-by-line analysis with revision notes.
    
    

• In-Line Edits & Commentary
  Expect direct feedback in your manuscript, including suggestions for improvements at the line level, transitions, and word choices.

• Final Summary & Action Plan
  At the end of the process, you’ll receive a detailed summary of strengths, areas for improvement, and next steps, so you can confidently move forward with your manuscript.

Process:

• The review and critique will take place over 6 weeks, giving me time to thoroughly analyze your work and provide the most useful feedback possible.
• You’ll receive updates and feedback in stages throughout the process, ensuring you can work on revisions while waiting for the final critique.